Moment in time

Name: Dereon

Date: 16/8/18

Learning Goal:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think
is happening in the photo.We are learning to use WOW! words like
adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read
our writing).

Title:  The worst day ever

I heard - I heard my friend from next door in front of me shouting HELP.

I saw - I saw different sized mountains surrounding me.

I felt - I felt terrified because it was like a rollercoaster but high up in the sky

I wonder - I wondered if I were going to fall and die without any safety gear.