Hi there Dereon, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
I like how you have pictures and lots of information. The layout is very cool, it makes it easy to read and look at.
WOW! I didn't know that one bacteria can make so much more. What did the little creature look like?
Next time just check that everything makes sense and if you have extra time maybe decorate it a bit more.
The microscope looks like it would be fun to use. I have used one before to look at things and it was interesting to learn about. What was your favourite part?
I think this is a very good blog post, I also love the background and the theme of your blog!
This is such a good informational slide and it would teach a lot of people. I think you did a great job on making it very cool with facts.
Maybe next time you could add more colour on the front cover so it makes it more eye catching for people, also maybe if you got the facts etc from google put a link where you got it from.
Hi there Dereon, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have pictures and lots of information. The layout is very cool, it makes it easy to read and look at.
WOW! I didn't know that one bacteria can make so much more. What did the little creature look like?
Next time just check that everything makes sense and if you have extra time maybe decorate it a bit more.
The microscope looks like it would be fun to use. I have used one before to look at things and it was interesting to learn about.
What was your favourite part?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Hey there Dereon,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a Year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I think this is a very good blog post, I also love the background and the theme of your blog!
This is such a good informational slide and it would teach a lot of people. I think you did a great job on making it very cool with facts.
Maybe next time you could add more colour on the front cover so it makes it more eye catching for people, also maybe if you got the facts etc from google put a link where you got it from.
Apart from that its great.
-Grace
Hello Dereon,
ReplyDeleteI am Alan, a Year 6 from Yaldhurst Model school.
Your blog post is really great. One of the things I liked was how much Information there was in the DLO.
Maybe Next time you could add a background to make it look more cool and also you could add an Introduction It would be great.
Keep up the great job
Kind regards,
Alan